Letter.
Unknown addresser.
Yesterday,when i was busy doing my homework,my mother asked me to look after my young sister who is five. I like her, she so funny, but she talks all the time and asks hundred questions a minute. Do you have brother or sister ( or maybe cousins)? How much time do you spend together, if at all? Would you like to be an only child in the family... Oh, before I forget. I have just finished reading a last book about Harry Potter.
My dear addresser.
I have no brother, no sister. But I always dream about younger sister. If I had a I would play with her every day. I taught her how to read, how to draw, how do makeup. We would spend together all the free time) Really, I think so) I am an only child in the family.It has its advantages. For example: all the best -food,clothes...etc, it's all go to me. But also excess attention, care and bla bla bla, it is too mine!!! Do you know... I can not say exactly... I like my life))
OMG!!! Do you really like Harry Potter?! It's my lovely book!! What do you think about this book? Who is your favorite character? Were you crying when Harry was fought with Voland?
I wait for your answer))
With love your reader <3
Hi Dasha,
ОтветитьУдалитьActually your post is full of contractions, signs and that 'OMG'. What does it mean? All this stuff is good for posts, but do not include them in your essay.
I liked a paragraph about Harry. The questions are precise and clear.
Keep writing,
Marina